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This week I had the most difficult time showing and telling a story. With any other paper I have done, I was sable to just type without thinking that I’m not doing it right. But with this I kept critiquing it before I just got it all down. I kept asking my self is my showing scene really showing enough? Am I being descriptive enough? Am I telling too much? Then for the fact that I though I finally understood it and it was so good. I went to save it and that’s when my heart dropped. The computer cut off. I was so mad I lost the motivation to write and kinda never went back to it. I wanted to shoot the computer screen all I had to do was pressed save and my paper would have been done.
Then we went back over it in class and I got it down pack now and now I know how to treat my nonfiction essay. Discussing that my paper can but a blend of stories at long as it has a theme really shined a light on my though process. Immediately I created a vin diagram for my paper. Everything came to me, the event and there connections hit me at once.
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I have this list that I made to complete when I come home from wildwood this past summer time. The list includes: Job, College, My Permit, and Driver license. So I can wipe everything off this list but a job. I got my driver license this week omg I was shocked I passed on my first time I was so nervous. Because I knew my turning wasn’t all that good, but I was enough to pass. Plus the car I rented was one of those driver ed cars I don’t know why the brake felt so weird but it felt like there was something behind it, as if I could push it. The brake probably was weird because it link to a break on the passenger side for the instructor. The guy that showed me round the course first was such in a rush that we ran through everything. He was on the phone and trying to give me directions at the same time. I like damn can you get off the phone. Then the real instructor that passed me was so irked by time it was time for my test I think he just passed me because I only made minor mistake and his mind was somewhere else. I made two mistakes 1. My arm got tangled in my turning process. 2. When I parked I didn’t put my right turning signal going in and my left coming out. But for the fact that I recognize that when he asked me he let me go. I really thought I was going to have to come back and reschedule my test.
This week I had the most difficult time showing and telling a story. With any other paper I have done, I was sable to just type without thinking that I’m not doing it right. But with this I kept critiquing it before I just got it all down. I kept asking my self is my showing scene really showing enough? Am I being descriptive enough? Am I telling too much? Then for the fact that I though I finally understood it and it was so good. I went to save it and that’s when my heart dropped. The computer cut off. I was so mad I lost the motivation to write and kinda never went back to it. I wanted to shoot the computer screen all I had to do was pressed save and my paper would have been done.
Then we went back over it in class and I got it down pack now and now I know how to treat my nonfiction essay. Discussing that my paper can but a blend of stories at long as it has a theme really shined a light on my though process. Immediately I created a vin diagram for my paper. Everything came to me, the event and there connections hit me at once.
Home
I have this list that I made to complete when I come home from wildwood this past summer time. The list includes: Job, College, My Permit, and Driver license. So I can wipe everything off this list but a job. I got my driver license this week omg I was shocked I passed on my first time I was so nervous. Because I knew my turning wasn’t all that good, but I was enough to pass. Plus the car I rented was one of those driver ed cars I don’t know why the brake felt so weird but it felt like there was something behind it, as if I could push it. The brake probably was weird because it link to a break on the passenger side for the instructor. The guy that showed me round the course first was such in a rush that we ran through everything. He was on the phone and trying to give me directions at the same time. I like damn can you get off the phone. Then the real instructor that passed me was so irked by time it was time for my test I think he just passed me because I only made minor mistake and his mind was somewhere else. I made two mistakes 1. My arm got tangled in my turning process. 2. When I parked I didn’t put my right turning signal going in and my left coming out. But for the fact that I recognize that when he asked me he let me go. I really thought I was going to have to come back and reschedule my test.